16 Mayıs 2014 Cuma

Argumentative Essay 1


                                                                                                                   

Should A Collage or University Education Be Tuition Free?

Education is the most important thing in our life.Generally parents want their children to have good education so as to in the future they would have a good job and they have a confortable life.With good education people can not only find a well paid job but also they can be looked up by other people.To have good education collage or university education is necessary,but everyone arguments that whether collage or university education be tuition free or not.

First of all,Cllage or university education should be free because all of the people can have good education and people can be equipped in their jobs.Unless collage or university education is free , most people can not have good education and they can not be successfull in their jobs.Because there aren’t a lot of people who are rich ,few people can have good job and their service is not enough for a country.

Second, If a collage or university education is not free ,there are few universities or collages because there aren’t so many people who can go to universities or collages.Moreover ,few teachers can work and few people are educated ,so jobless people’s numbers increase and this causes  to poverty and crime in a country because people who are jobless don’t have comfortable life ,so they want to live like wealthy people and they start to thive something from rich  people to live comfortable.


Third, a collage and university education should be free because if people don’t go to collage or university they can’t improve themselves.No matter how they are intelligent , without any education or practise they can not be successfull.For example , a poor student who can’t go go university try to study by himself ,he can be successful in exams ,but when he starts to a job he can’t be successfull because he can not do any practise ,so without practise he can not be successfull in his job.He can’t serve people well.


In conclusion,education is one of the most important thing in our life.Collage or university education should be free so that  all of the people can have good education and there are enough people who can serve the community.And also,the less educated people ,the less improved country,people’s education and their success make a country improved , so collage and university education should be free for both people and countries. 

9 Mayıs 2014 Cuma

Argumentative Essay 2

Should The University Students Live in Flat or Dormitory?

When students start  to study in a university, they find themselves in a   caos.The place where the students will live is a big problem between students and their family. While students mostly want to rent a flat, their family persists in deterring their children from that idea, and they do their best to fulfill this. Though most parents are in favor of dormitory, I believe students should live in a flat.
The first reason why university students should stay in a flat during their education in a university is that staying in a flat brings them  responsibility. Firstly, they learn to get along on their money. For example, they have to pay bills and the house rent on time. They also learn to retrench. Because they can make  meal at home, they spend less money for dinner.They can make meal even with less materials.
Secondly, if students live in a flat while studying at a university in a distant city from their parents, they can become self-sustained individuals. They begin to do domestic work that they did not use to do.For example ,they get use to making meal without any help. When there is a problem with the housekeeping, they can cope with this problem without their father’s help. In other words, they can stand on their own feet. After they graduate university and they have a house ,they will  have to do these works alone ,so they should get use to doing these works early.
Parents who want their children to stay in a dormitory think that while living in a dormitory, their children will be at ease and will spend less money and also they think dormitories are more confident ,but in some dormitories are not completely confident. To their thought, if students live in a flat, they can not protect themselves against dangers such as burglary. They also think that the expenses in a flat will cost more. However, in a dormitory, student is exposed to more dangers because there are a lot of people who are from different cities. All of them have different characteristic feature. If students become friends with someone whose character is bad, they can begin to drop into bad habits. Moreover, they spend much more money, because they usually do not like the meals in the dormitory, and they often eat at outside.
To conclude, living in a flat ,or in a dormitory while studying at a university is a big problem between parents and students. Parents do not want their children to rent a flat, because they think that their children cannot be at ease. Living in a flat brings students a lot of advantages and usefulness and they live in comfort , so they should  prefer to live in a flat.


8 Mayıs 2014 Perşembe

Final Draft of Comparison and Contrast Essay -2

                                                                                            
                                                                                           
                                            
Final Draft of  Comparison and Contrast Essay -2

Differences Between Male Friends and Female Friends

Friendship is one of the most important concept in the world. We cannot live without communicating with others. Because of that, every human being is a need for establishing a good friendship with others. However, To have a good friendship, your friend’s gender is very important. There are a lot of differences between having female friends and male friends.

To start with, if you have female friends , you can share everything. Generally, females listen to you every time and you can share your problems easily. They are more sensible than males. They try to solve your problems and they try to make you happy.

Second, if you have female friends , your friends make your life easier. For example ,when you go a party or any other place , your female friends help you to wear or , when you go to shop to buy some clothes , your female friends help you to choose the clothes but, male friends hate to go shopping and they are unwilling to help you.

Third , having female friends makes your life funnier. Generally, females like gossip about other people and this gossip is sometimes funny and  females like making surprise to you and this makes you funny. On the other hand, males hates gossip and they don’t like making surprise. Their friendships are monotonic.

Then , if you have male friends , you feel confident. You can go out so late and nobody can damage you. Even if someone could try to damage  you, your male friends can protect you from other people ,but a female do nothing to protect you  because  males are more powerful than females.

Finally , if you have male friends , you can act freely  because your actions are not important for them. They don’t tell your actions to other people and they don’t condemn you. On the other hand , females keep an eye on your actions and if they think one of your actions is bad they say it everyone and they condemn your actions.

In conclusion , there are a lot of differences between having male friends and female friends Female friends are more sensible , funnier and more helpful , however , male friends don’t have these peculiarities. On the other hand , males are more reliable and careless about some actions.







2 Mayıs 2014 Cuma

Final Draft of Cause and Effect Essay

                                  
                             The Effects of War

In the world,all of the people have not good relationship one another and they sometimes prefer war, instead of solving their problems in a good way.Wars occur not only two or more different states but also at least two people in the same state.Wars effect both people and their states in bad ways. Wars have bad effects on people , these effects are economic effects, social effects, psychological effects, health effects and environmental effects.

First of all, wars affect people’s economy. In a war, states, or people spend their money to have good guns, bombs, or other devices. And also, a country can’t improve because anyone can’t work in the country. A country which has a lot of tourists can’t have money during war since no tourists can go there.

Second, wars have social effects on people’s life. Suppose that there is a war in a country ,how can children who live this country go to their school, or how can teachers, doctors and other people go to  their works and help people? In the war, anyone can’t go out and do nothing.

Third, wars affect people’s psychology . Especially children are affected baddish because they are more sensible and fearful. For example, in a war a child may loose his/her parents and this makes some psychological  problems. And also, while other children are playing games and doing other activities, children who are exposed to war can’t play or do any activities. Their brains can’t improve and during their life time they have psychological problems.

Forth, people’s health is  influenced because of wars. During war, people may bruise and also, they may loose part of their bodies. Because of the waste of wars’ materials, people can be cancer, they have immune system illnesses, or respiration illnesses.

Then, wars have environmental effects. During a war the environment may be dirty because of the waste of wars’ materials and fields can be fruitless. These fields don’t yield even after the war. Because of wars, the air is also polluted and this affects people’s health.


In conclusion, wars affect people’s lives in bad ways. It has economic effects, social effects, psychological effects, health effects and environmental effects which cause people’s death, bruises and poverty. Atatürk said that ‘Peace at home and peace in the world.’ Atatürk taught it to us and we have still act to Atatürk’s teaching. We should teach it the whole wold and live together in peace.