2 Mayıs 2014 Cuma

Final Draft of Cause and Effect Essay

                                  
                             The Effects of War

In the world,all of the people have not good relationship one another and they sometimes prefer war, instead of solving their problems in a good way.Wars occur not only two or more different states but also at least two people in the same state.Wars effect both people and their states in bad ways. Wars have bad effects on people , these effects are economic effects, social effects, psychological effects, health effects and environmental effects.

First of all, wars affect people’s economy. In a war, states, or people spend their money to have good guns, bombs, or other devices. And also, a country can’t improve because anyone can’t work in the country. A country which has a lot of tourists can’t have money during war since no tourists can go there.

Second, wars have social effects on people’s life. Suppose that there is a war in a country ,how can children who live this country go to their school, or how can teachers, doctors and other people go to  their works and help people? In the war, anyone can’t go out and do nothing.

Third, wars affect people’s psychology . Especially children are affected baddish because they are more sensible and fearful. For example, in a war a child may loose his/her parents and this makes some psychological  problems. And also, while other children are playing games and doing other activities, children who are exposed to war can’t play or do any activities. Their brains can’t improve and during their life time they have psychological problems.

Forth, people’s health is  influenced because of wars. During war, people may bruise and also, they may loose part of their bodies. Because of the waste of wars’ materials, people can be cancer, they have immune system illnesses, or respiration illnesses.

Then, wars have environmental effects. During a war the environment may be dirty because of the waste of wars’ materials and fields can be fruitless. These fields don’t yield even after the war. Because of wars, the air is also polluted and this affects people’s health.


In conclusion, wars affect people’s lives in bad ways. It has economic effects, social effects, psychological effects, health effects and environmental effects which cause people’s death, bruises and poverty. Atatürk said that ‘Peace at home and peace in the world.’ Atatürk taught it to us and we have still act to Atatürk’s teaching. We should teach it the whole wold and live together in peace.

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  1. 1)...all of the people have not good relationship * one another... =>Prep.
    'to have relationship with someone'
    2)'one another' is wrong word. You can use 'each other'.
    3)Wars occur not only two or more different states but also at least two people in the same state. (Rewrite this sentence, what you meant is not clear)

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